Pivot Point by Kasie West [book review]

Pivot Point coverPivot Point by Kasie West
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Release Date: February 12th 2013
Publisher: HarperTeen
Series:  Pivot Point #1

Goodreads description: Knowing the outcome doesn’t always make a choice easier . . .

Addison Coleman’s life is one big “What if?” As a Searcher, whenever Addie is faced with a choice, she can look into the future and see both outcomes. It’s the ultimate insurance plan against disaster. Or so she thought. When Addie’s parents ambush her with the news of their divorce, she has to pick who she wants to live with—her father, who is leaving the paranormal compound to live among the “Norms,” or her mother, who is staying in the life Addie has always known. Addie loves her life just as it is, so her answer should be easy. One Search six weeks into the future proves it’s not.

In one potential future, Addie is adjusting to life outside the Compound as the new girl in a Norm high school where she meets Trevor, a cute, sensitive artist who understands her. In the other path, Addie is being pursued by the hottest guy in school—but she never wanted to be a quarterback’s girlfriend. When Addie’s father is asked to consult on a murder in the Compound, she’s unwittingly drawn into a dangerous game that threatens everything she holds dear. With love and loss in both lives, it all comes down to which reality she’s willing to live through . . . and who she can’t live without.

I bought Pivot Point when it was on sale for $1.99 on Kindle. I kept hearing so many great things about it that I thought I should check it out!

Addie lives in a compound where everyone has paranormal abilities. Abilities such as Clairvoyance (close to what Addie has), Persuasion (her mom has this ability), and Telekinesis (a guy at school). Addie’s actual ability is a rare one called Divergence (that it was called this made sense but it also annoyed me slightly) where she can see what will happen with every possible future, if she chooses to Search it. If she comes to a choice, she can Search both options for possible outcomes. Addie’s parents are splitting up and her dad is moving off the compound which means she has to decide if she wants to stay with her mom or move with her dad and the only thing to do, instead of just making a decision, is to Search each option for possible outcomes.

I liked Addie, but she also annoyed me and I had to roll my eyes at her a bit. It’s lovely that she would rather read than party and her friend Leila has to try to pull her out of her shell. That’s pretty normal, people like to read. But Addie is also very set in her views about certain things and how people act, and I didn’t always think she was being very fair. She was also really extreme about her parents and she was banking on her reaction as a moody teenager and manipulating them in ways that were unfair. It was even a somewhat believable move for a whiny teenager, but I found it annoying. Her friendship with Leila is nice, but Leila could be extreme and reckless. Leila and Addie did have some funny conversations such as the following:

“So let me get this straight. If I didn’t have an ability, you wouldn’t like me?”
I sigh. “Of course I’d like you. But that’s because you’re outspoken, bossy, and don’t care what anyone else thinks.”
“You just made me sound like a total witch.”
“I know, but let’s not get sidetracked. This is my meltdown.”

The idea for the abilities and Addie’s Searching is really interesting, but the execution was frustrating. In the Searches, there were more decisions that would cause everything to go a different way. I mean, there are so many decisions in every day so why would every decision after one decision be exactly the same and lead to the exact same results? Plus some decisions have more than two choices! Just because she chose one or the other doesn’t mean the exact same things would happen, or it shouldn’t mean that. The book kind of discusses the limitations of her ability but I do feel like it was kind of ignored in general. Am I being too critical and nerdy about this? Maybe I am, but it bugged me!

The story alternates between the Search for Addie that stays and Addie that leaves. Some things are really interesting, what similarities happen and what ends up being really different. There’s a larger threat lurking in the back in both options and watching it play out in both options is interesting, but not perfect. I feel like a lot of the action at the end is contrived to force Addie’s decision and make it more difficult. I know a story needs conflict, but some of it was just weird and didn’t seem to fit the story.

After Searching both options, Addie has to make a decision, and I hated the decision. Maybe I didn’t actually hate the decision itself, but how it was handled. I thought the ending of the book was weak and disappointing. I wanted more. I wanted something proactive. I think the limitations of her ability were just sad and make the story about the ability almost pointless. There are just so many possibilities out there, and I think the science fiction/paranormal aspect of the book just fails to look at the scope of it all. 

2.5 stars

This book wasn’t bad, it was even enjoyable. It had nice romantic scenes and some funny moments that I enjoyed. I was a little letdown by the execution and Addie’s ability and attitude. I’m not sure if I want to read the next book, Split Second, but I’m interested in reading West’s contemporary, The Distance Between Us. It might not have been for me, but I know a lot of people did so if you think it sounds like something you would enjoy, I definitely think you should read it and not let my picky ways sway you! I would recommend Pivot Point if you enjoy mental abilities, indecision, two love interests but not exactly a triangle!

Check out Kasie West‘s website and twitter!

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13 thoughts on “Pivot Point by Kasie West [book review]

  1. Ooh, interesting! You’re the first person I’ve seen be kind of “meh” about this book. I liked it a lot, but I didn’t LOVE it, for much the same reasons you mentioned–mostly Addie. Her character was great at parts, and then a little grating at others. I really liked The Distance Between Us, though–I’d recommend that one maybe over continuing this series? I thought the narrator is DBU was a great improvement, and it was a really cute story.

    • At first I was kind of liking it and willing to let my annoyance with her go, but after the ending I was too disappointed. I do feel like I probably won’t continue the series, especially when there’s so much else to read! I’m glad you think the narrator in Distance Between Us was better, I’ve been planning on reading it to see if I’d like it more!

  2. I loved the cover of this book, but I’m so on the fence as to whether I would enjoy it or not. I think it would frustrate me that Addie’s ability is called “Divergence” also! I think perhaps The Distance Between Us might be more up my alley! I hope you like that one better! 🙂

    • Most people really love it! I feel alone in my disappointment, haha. Divergence seems like a small deal, but it was annoying! The Distance Between Us sounds really cute! I’m going to see if my library has it at some point, there are just soooo many books to read!

  3. I’ve read SO many glowing reviews for this and everyone seems to be waiting with bated breath for book 2! I was all ready to jump on the bandwagon and pick up a copy, but after reading your review I’m hesitant. It seems like I might be kind of underwhemled.

    I’ve recently finished reading The Distance Between Us by the way – I’d recommend that! The characters are sassy, have fantastic banter and great chemistry. I loved it!

    – Allie @ Little Birdie Books

    • It could just be me, I feel like the only one that hasn’t loved it! I did see a few others on GR but for the most part it’s looove. I think if I had been meh about Addie and thought the story was solid or vice versa, I would have liked it a lot more. But with both things and not loving the ending, it wasn’t for me!

      The Distance Between Us sounds great! I am definitely planning on reading it! I like the chemistry in Pivot Point, so I believe you about that, and I love sassy characters! Thanks!

  4. Hmm, you make some good points that I never thought of. I always thought the explanations and world building were a bit weak but I hope that is remedied in the next book. I did enjoy this one, but can definitely understand your opinion.
    Alise @ Readers in Wonderland

    • I think if I’d liked Addie more the weaknesses in the story wouldn’t have bothered me quite as much, maybe. But with all the questions, Addie, and how it ended, I was pretty disappointed. I still thought it was okay, but I didn’t love it. I can see why people enjoyed it, though!

  5. I have to admit that this looks like a pretty good read. I’ve read raving reviews, but I get how it could be a bland read. Don’t know if I’ll be reding tho soon, but I’ll be interested to see what I think of it if I do. Great review! 🙂

    • Most people seem to really enjoy it! I just had issues with the abilities and the main character, but I can see why people enjoy it. If you ever read it it, I’ll be interested to see what you think, too!

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